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Me and my class have written some Creative writing last week. We had to make a google doc and make our plan. We also had to choose a genre to write about. I chose horror because I had an idea in my head which was related to horror. My writing is kind of long so it might take you a while to read it.

 

Here is my plan and story:

Plan 

Settings: Forest, Haunted house and School

 

Characters: Layla, Crystal, Sariyah, Loiloi and Pita

 

BME: They all asked their parents if they could go to the forest then end up getting lost then Sariyah and her dad tried to look for them and ended up not being found. 

 

Writing: 

 

Title: Nowhere to be found.. 

Once Upon A Time there was this friend group where they all lived in a neighborhood with a forest beside their houses. BUT what they didn’t know was that the forest was HAUNTED. One day during maths, they were planning to go to the forest next week on the weekends. “Sure! I’ll ask my mum” says Layla. 

“I’ll ask my mum as well,” said Pita. “Sorry I can’t come,” said Sariyah,” maybe next time.” Crystal giggled. “Me and Loiloi already asked our parents yesterday before we planned it!” They all laughed. Layla is the girl who is always happy, Crystal is the girl who likes hanging out with her friends a lot, Sariyah is the one who likes vibing a lot, Loiloi is the quiet one most times and Pita is the funny one sometimes. 

The next day they said all of their parents agreed. One week later on Friday, the friend group started packing their bags with snacks, torches and a knife just in case something goes wrong. The next day, which was Saturday, the whole friend group including Sariyah, stood outside their houses waiting for each other. “See you guys later and have fun!” Says Sariyah. 

They then started to walk over to the forest. Bats flying past, spiders swinging on their webs. Loiloi screams. “Sorry I just saw an army of cockroaches sprint past.” “Wow, that’s the first time I heard you scream” Says Layla. Crystal gags. “Sorry I saw a spider.” “The eyes make me disgusted.” They then continued their journey in the HAUNTED forest. As they got half way through the forest, Pita says “wait what’s that?” as he wipes his eyes thinking it’s his imagination. They saw a dark grey house in their sight walking further and further into the forest. “Should we go explore the house..?” Askes Layla. “Why not?” Says Pita. They all then sprinted to the haunted house. All of them entered the house. The floor and the doors creak. As they entered, they could smell something rotten. They were looking in the kitchen and they saw a dead rat sitting on the sink. “Ewww yuck!” Says Crystal. Layla got a tissue out of her bag, picked up the rat by its tail and threw it outside the window. As Loiloi walks up the stairs the stairs creak. “Yup I’m not going up there unless someone comes with me” Says Loiloi. “I will come” says Pita. Pita and Loiloi walk up the stairs. While Loiloi and Pita were exploring upstairs, Layla and Crystal were having a little snack. “Ok let’s go back to exploring,” Says Crystal. As they were exploring they found a random door behind one of the couches. “Should we open it?” Askes Layla. “No, let’s wait for Loiloi and Pita to come back because it might be dangerous” Says Crystal. “The floor is so dusty” Says Layla. Meanwhile with Loiloi and Pita, they found a room with a very dusty bed. Pita looked out the window and saw a shadow on one of the bushes. “Loiloi RUN” Loiloi and Pita ran down the stairs. “Don’t do that ever again you guys scared me with the loud creaks” Says Layla. “Sorry but I SAW A SHADOW IN THE BUSH” Says Pita. “I never thought that this house would be haunted” Says Crystal. “Anyways me and Crystal found a door behind the couch and we wanted to wait for you guys to come” Says Layla. “Ok, let’s explore it now,” Says Loiloi. They removed the couch and opened the door. “I can see something in their..” Says Pita. “Come guys lets go inside” Says Crystal. “Uhh I don’t think it’s a good idea, ” says Layla. “Stop being scared and face your fear” replied Crystal. “Ok fine” Says Layla. They all entered the door. Loiloi and Pita watched Crystal and Layla get dragged by the arm into the door. “UHH WE HAVE TO RUN” Says Loiloi. “No, we have to go save them,” Says Pita. Pita takes out the knife out of his bag and holds it in his hand while he enters. Pita felt the knife get slapped out of his hand and get dragged in. Loiloi runs to the front door immediately. The door shuts close. Loiloi screams. She then gets dragged on all that dust into the basement, and the basement door shuts. Two hours passed and Sariyah was waiting for the group outside. Sariyah turns around to her dad and says “Dad I don’t think they’re coming back..” “Should we go look for them?” asked Sariyah. “Ok” Answers Sariyah’s dad. As they got halfway through, they saw a man with a black jumper with his hood holding a knife standing in front of the haunted house. “No it’s not safe were just gonna have to call the police” Says Sariyah’s dad. They walked back home and called the police. The police couldn’t do anything because they couldn’t find them so they were never to be seen or heard from since that day..