Through The Lens Writing

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On Monday, our teacher Mrs Patel, gave us some writing to do. The title was Through The Lens. It was about an Otter named Ozzy, and his biggest dream was to become the best photographer. She told us to go to the class site and go to the reading and writing page and click on writing prompts. It had a story starter, sentence starters and a word bank. the word bank really helped me with my writing. It was also a fiction story. There was already a story there so we had the choice to finish it off or make our own story. But I wrote the last sentence and then I finished it off. I kinda struggled with trying to think of ideas. My favourite part was finding beautiful adjectives. 

Here’s my story:

Determined to prove himself, Ozzy embarked on a quest to capture an image so extraordinary that even Hiram would be impressed. As Ozzy ventured deeper into the forest, he stumbled upon a stack of twigs. Ozzy got back up on his two feet feeling red faced, but kept on going. Ozzy’s dream was to become the best photographer! The sun’s golden rays danced through the leaves, illuminating a dazzling, shiny bright tree! Ozzy was filled with so much joy that he jumped up and down. As the wind blew the leaves, Ozzy’s camera shutter clicked, taking a prize winning photo of the dazzling tree getting blown by the wind. Ozzy took 3 photos of the tree and started the march away trying to find another dazzling thing to capture. 

To be continued…